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Am I the only one
Who sees the weekness in your life
Broken hearts no longer cry
I have seen this day, in my dream
seeing you, struck with pain

Never thought I'd see you helpless
only saw you ever smiling
Never thought, It'd come to this
Have to watch my best friend dying

I feel your grasp, your pulling away
I see your face, turning gray
These drugs, they call you slave
Shoot up one more time
And I'll dig your grave

Seeing my pain just wasnt enough
My plea for help, just didnt get through
not trying to change
just bringing back what used to be you

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  • Current Residence: Redlands CA
  • Interests: Baseball
  • Favourite movie: Boondock Saints
  • Favourite band or musician: Bleeding Through
  • Favourite genre of music: Hard-Core
  • Operating System: windows
  • Shell of choice: Sea Shell
  • Wallpaper of choice: dark
  • Favourite game: quarters
  • Personal Quote: Find what is yours and keep it!

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:iconthrough-the-thorns:
If you could go back in time to the moment we met and know what would happen, would you turn and walk away or would you do it all again knowing we'd fail?

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All's fair in love and war, though i prefer war
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:iconherbstkind:
thanks a lot for the :+fav:
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:icontia-the-fairy:
hey, thanks for your comment, its rare for random people to comment on poetry!
Welcome to DA
:cuddle::petting::licking::hug::blowkiss:

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just imaginary....
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:iconuhcnfsns:
well since i dont know anyone i figuered that by commenting on their poetry they would read mine in-return =)
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:iconschmeefer:
thanks for the addition of the fav! :D

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:iconpsychoticchic69:
thanks for your comment it was really sweet!!!!! :hug:

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:iconabysscus:
Thanks for your comment on my first poem. Good point.
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